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<Social media is beneficial to South Korea society> 20515 윤사랑 (Sa-rang Yoon) In the book 'Engage: The Complete Guide for Brands and Businesses to Build, Cultivate, and Measure Success in the New Web', the writer Brian Solis said “Social media sparks a revelation that we, the people, have a voice, and through the democratization of content and ideas we can once again unite around common passions, inspire movements, and ignite change.” These days, SNS became an inseparable thing for people, and many people live by sharing their thoughts and getting various information through social media. Think about the case when other people got help through your smartphone. They could build relationships with many people and also express their opinions on political or social news. Although the overuse of smartphone has been a problem, social media offers them many advantages. Social media is a platform that allows users to expand their interpersonal network while sha